Saturday, December 8, 2007
Cheng-Yu Tsai
Hi Cheng-Yu,
Please find my deskcrit for your project below;
I love the overall design of your project into the shape of a camera, it is very effective.
I like your navigation throughout the project; it is easy and clear to follow. I like the clicking sound as if you are taking a picture each time you move to another section. Your text size is good and you have made a good use of color. This is a very good project, my only suggestion is that you review some of your sentences within the project. You also transposed the word “what” on the 3rd page on “How to use a Flash light properly”.
I loved your project and look forward to using it to learn how to hopefully take better pictures and get better results.
Regards,
Remi
