Saturday, December 8, 2007
Trudian Trail
Hi Trudian,
Please find my deskcrits for your work below
I like your poetry garden a lot. Your background sets the tone and that serene feeling comes across. I loved the tour-guide and the background music, it added some more to the ambience of your project. My only suggestion is that at the beginning you could have had a little suggestion or indicator to your visitors to start at the tour guide section. This is a personal preference though. I think you did a good job with the map and the hint which helps guide any visitor through your project I liked your navigation buttons (cute :)). I like that the garden changes when you read through the poems and it becomes totally changed once the poems are completed. I loved your project and look forward to your future projects.
Overall an extremely creative project which also connects with the visitor in a deeper level. Great job!!
Remi
